DamnianWayne@lemmy.world to World News@quokk.au · 2 months agoMen who allegedly helped rapist drug and abuse wife can be namedwww.bbc.comexternal-linkmessage-square15linkfedilinkarrow-up1137arrow-down10
arrow-up1137arrow-down1external-linkMen who allegedly helped rapist drug and abuse wife can be namedwww.bbc.comDamnianWayne@lemmy.world to World News@quokk.au · 2 months agomessage-square15linkfedilink
minus-squareiamthetot@piefed.calinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up7·2 months agoWhat is wrong with the title? It conveys the same information as your version with significantly fewer words.
minus-squaretyler@programming.devlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·2 months agoThe title as is can be read (and is how I read it) as “men who allegedly helped ‘rapist drug’ and ‘abuse wife’ (a-byoos, not ah-byouse) can be named”
What is wrong with the title? It conveys the same information as your version with significantly fewer words.
The title as is can be read (and is how I read it) as “men who allegedly helped ‘rapist drug’ and ‘abuse wife’ (a-byoos, not ah-byouse) can be named”