BilSabab@lemmy.world to Vintage and Retro Ads, Promos, Fliers, Etc. @sh.itjust.worksEnglish · 21 days agoSugar Information Inc (1965)lemmy.worldimagemessage-square74linkfedilinkarrow-up1357arrow-down10file-text
arrow-up1357arrow-down1imageSugar Information Inc (1965)lemmy.worldBilSabab@lemmy.world to Vintage and Retro Ads, Promos, Fliers, Etc. @sh.itjust.worksEnglish · 21 days agomessage-square74linkfedilinkfile-text
minus-squareCultLeader4Hire@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up9·21 days agoI absolutely hate how this reads. How is “for energy” its own sentence on its own line, reads so poorly
minus-squarebampop@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·20 days ago For energy? Perchance. There I fixed it
minus-squareBilSabab@lemmy.worldOPlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·21 days agoit was acceptable in the 60s
I absolutely hate how this reads. How is “for energy” its own sentence on its own line, reads so poorly
There I fixed it
it was acceptable in the 60s