Reminds me of Christopher Lee explaining to Peter Jackson what it sounds like when you stab someone in the back
[off topic]
David Page, ‘Body Trauma’
Describes how people react to various injuries. Invaluable for anyone creating a game or writing a story.
“He closed his eyes and his heart beat one last time. Carla cried in despair as all of his hair fell out, a final sign he would never wake up again.”
“then he farted that one fart we all try not to talk about to preserve the dignity of the departed. Real high and squeaky. You know the one.”
So I’m already half dead…
You know if someones hair all fell out I would assume so
When an infomercial says, “But wait! There’s more!”
That’s usually the calibre of writing, but enough people get their credit cards out.
I just came across this. Amos from The Red Pyramid. Carter sees him trapped by the big bad Set only to change the scene.
